Monday, October 12, 2009

Draft Press Release 4

For Immediate Release: Oct. 20, 2009

Mark Steel Jewelry
568 S. Foothill Drive Kamas, UT 84036
435-783-4447
marksteeljewelry@gmail.com

New Products and Services that Sparkle
Mark Steel Jewelry releases new catalog, jewelry styles, and website

KAMAS, UTAH- Mark Steel Jewelry recently released a new catalog with new earring styles included. The company also recently launched a new website for the sales reps, where they can do business online. The new catalog highlights the traditional styles of earrings, and also showcases the newly released ones. Owners Matt Flinders and Mark Soffe say their main goal was to increase customer satisfaction, and make things easier for the sales representatives that work for Mark Steel. The current catalog that was released was over two years ago, and Matt and Mark feel that this catalog showcases the jewelry better. “We work daily to see how we can improve the quality of our product, and showcase it better to customers,” said Soffe. The website used to only be available for viewing selected styles of jewelry, but it now has a wider selection, a store locator for the reps, and contact information of how to order from the company. “We hope these changes improve our relationship with our customers,” said Flinders.
Mark Steel Jewelry was founded in 1979 by Mark Steel Soffe. The company manufacturers all of the jewelry locally and then ships it out to stores across the United States. They produced hand crafted earrings, finger rings, and toe rings with sterling silver and 14K gold filled. To find out more information visit marksteeljewlry.com or, contact the designated PR specialist listed below.

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Emily Flinders
Public Relations representative
emily.flinders@aggiemail.usu.edu

3 comments:

  1. I really like the sub-title, and the main title is catchy.
    Set apart the boilerplate by italicizing.
    Also, you don't need both Kamas and Utah to be CAPS, just Kamas I believe.
    A little more meat and length would be good.
    Pretty good quotes, maybe just one more that really stands out.

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  2. I like the quotes, maybe one more would be good. Overall I think it should be a little longer though.

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  3. I like the idea of what you have, the first paragraph is a bit long, so maybe separate the different ideas into new paragraphs...

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